"Ooh, I wonder what this guy's agenda is. I agree with Dianne, I think letting the readers experience the crash with your MC will make this a more powerful start to your manuscript. Don't be afraid to throw us into the action! Focusing on…"
"Interesting beginning! I like the premise for the opening lines, but I think it needs a change in verb tense. How about: "Life can change in a second. That's all it takes. One second. That second would eventually lead to the biggest change…"
This is only the beggining of my story, but I hope you enjoy it! Life can change in a second. That's all it takes. One second. That second would later lead to the biggest change of my life. But I didn't know that yet. There was no way to predict what happened. My parents were driving me to a concert for my birthday. They were going to drop me off and then go buy my little brother, Kevin, a birthday present. He was turning seven in a month. "I cannot believe you guys got me tickets to this!" I…See More
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