"My first choice is #3. It's intriguing, with the faucet dripping water, and a pile of dust underneath.
My second choice is #7. I don't like the way the title is in #2, and I like the full face more than the partial in #4."
"Hi Breezy! I am going to repost and add my comments in bold. Feel free to use what you like and ignore the rest. This is fun! Good luck!
The cops come just as I’m about to finish up my shift at Pie in the Sky, the local bakery in town.…"
"Larissa, I like the idea of the freaky book that has so mesmerized the students -- and especially the title of it, Lure.
The conversation with Melissa in the opening lines didn't feel quite right to me. "I bought extra copies."…"
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