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"I was wondering if there is a way to switch the background to read these. I find reading white font on a black background difficult on my eyes. Plus the font is very small. Is anyone else having a problem with this? It's pretty, but I'm…"
"Thanks for the feedback. I'll have to give your comments some thought."
Dianne Salerni replied to Joyce Lansky's discussion Being Bompsy Carleffa in the group Writer's Forum"Joyce, I agree about the strong voice of the main character. He is engaging right from the beginning of the story.
I think what I would recommend working on is the action and description of people moving around in the scene. Ben seemed to be able…"
Lisa and Laura Roecker replied to Joyce Lansky's discussion Being Bompsy Carleffa in the group Writer's Forum"Joyce, I really like the voice in this! It's always great to hear from a male MC that's written well. I have to confess I got a little lost with all the characters introduced. It was a little confusing. Maybe try starting out with less…"
Being Bompsy Carleffa
Thanks for any feedback. I'm always looking to improve! Joyce The last bell ended my teacher’s discussion on Carnegie, Rockefeller and Vanderbilt. Knowing I’d never get rich like those dead guys, I stuffed myhistory book into my backpack as kids pushed out the door. The few of us whodidn’t want to fight the crowd, hung out under a poster of old campaignslogans. Someone had drawn a dirty picture under “Cox and Cocktails,” and Ichuckled. Sarah tilted her head and squeezed her brow.I…See More
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